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This is a paper of relative importance to me. Please point out any glaring errors.


Zoroastrianism has about an eighth of a million adherents today. Prior to the downfall of the Sassanid Empire at the hands of the Umayyad Caliphate, Zoroastrians were relatively common in Iran and China. While a few remain in Iran, they are totally unknown in China (although a few of their temples still attest their presence there), and a significant number known as Parsis live in India (Encylcopedia Britannica). Otherwise Zoroastrians are totally absent from their ancestral lands (scattered reports of large numbers of Zoroastrians in Iraq almost certainly refer to the obscure Yazidi sect), having largely converted to Islam in the seventh century during the Umayyad conquest. Because of the time since the conversion of most Zoroastrian lands and the nonconsensual nature of conversion to Islam, it might appear remarkable that there are any Zoroastrians left at all in Iran.

There was, however, a specific exception clause within the more religiously tolerant Abbasid Dynasty (the Umayyad’s immediate successors) regarding certain other faiths, labeled “peoples of the book”. Christians and Muslims were not forced to convert, but could continue to practice their faiths with a certain degree of social autonomy and acceptance, albeit at a higher tax rate. Some Muslim intellectuals, including Imam Malik (a particularly formidable name in the Muslim world), argued that this same exception should be extended to Zoroastrians, which explains their continued existence in Iran, but poses the question of why the Imam thought that Zoroastrians were “peoples of the book”.
The term “people(s) of the book” in Islamic doctrine refers to those whom, according to the Koran, posses divine scriptures (albeit corrupted ones). If this particular legal umbrella was to be extended to Zoroastrians along with other Abrahamic faiths (and Zoroastrianism certainly is not an Abrahamic faith), then there must be some compelling similarity that would induce the Abbasids do so. The similarity is certainly there, as Zoroastrianism shares with the Abrahamic faiths the concept of one supreme good deity opposed to one evil deity, angels, and the concept of the judgment of the soul. Many have then wondered if this similarity is because of more than a coincidence. Indeed, it stretches most credulity to assert that from within the highly diverse pool that is human religion two completely independent faiths with such similar worldviews, especially considering their relative proximity.

The question of whether Zoroastrianism had an effect on Christianity, for indeed that is the logical direction of ideological flow, which might account for the similarity between the two faiths, is a difficult one to answer. There is a great deal of ambiguity regarding the development of both faiths, so much so that it is hard to determine whether Zoroastrianism affected Judaism (and secondarily Christianity), Christianity, or whether all the monotheistic religions of the Middle East were derived from a common source. Religions throughout the world are certainly prone enough to mixing that these are all possible in principle. More evidence is necessary to definitively prove the point.
A final possibility remains that the resemblance between Christianity and Zoroastrianism is in fact coincidental and superficial, and any parallels drawn between the two result from the common elements of all human religions and the human tendency to find patterns where none in fact exist. To prove this would require a vigorous review of the similarities between the two faiths and a thorough demonstration of how these similarities are both inconsequential in a historical context as well as likely to arouse notice. This hypothesis is, along with the others, largely improvable with current information.

Zoroastrianism is usually described as having been founded by the prophet Zarathustra (Zoroaster is the Greek rendition of the same). The extent to which Zarathustra merely reformed the region’s existing religion and the extent to which he came up with new material is certainly debatable (Shaked, 2003). Even the time during which he lived is unknown, probably lying somewhere between the fourteenth and sixth centuries BCE. This is clearly a huge extent of time, and the issue is argued vociferously, but the most reasonable conclusion is simply that nobody knows when exactly Zarathustra lived, as most of the arguments are based on rather scanty evidence. Furthermore, very little is known about what early Zoroastrianism was like. The Avesta (Zoroastrian holy book) was probably passed down orally during at least part of its history, and parts probably added, edited and removed. According to Mills (Mills, 1913),

Many interested but necessarily hasty readers of the Zend Avesta overlook
the fact that in the ancient documents comprised under that name we have many works of many different ages.

Furthermore, many of the early Zoroastrian states, especially the Parthians, kept poor or no written records. What is known of their practices is largely from biased Greek, Jewish and Roman sources (Shaked). By the time of solid written records under the Sassanids ca 230 AD, Christianity had already been established, which would preclude a large Zoroastrian role in that religion’s formation, although not necessarily the evolution of its doctrines.
The definitive form of Zoroastrianism under the Sassanids to which Christianity is compared and holds so many parallels is a monotheistic veneration of the supreme God Ahura Mazda. Opposing Ahura Mazda is the evil deity Angra Mainyu, in some variants the twin of Ahura Mazda, and in some others, merely a different manifestation of the same pervasive spirit of creation that generated the universe. According to all Zoroastrians, Ahura Mazda will eventually prevail over Angra Mainyu. Ahunuvaiti 3:5 sums up the ditheism thus:

Of these Twin Spirits, the Evil one chooses doing the worst,
While the most bountiful Holy Spirit of Goodness, clothing itself in the imperishable heavens, chooses Truth and Righteousness.
And so will those who would please God
with righteous deeds, performed with faith in Truth.

Zoroastrianism also incorporates the concept of eternal rewards for just life and final judgment of souls, much like Christianity. Fire is also used extensively in Zoroastrian rituals, so much that many form the misconception that the Zoroastrians are actually praying to the fire. In actuality, fire is merely a symbol for Ahura Mazda, just as the cross is merely a symbol for the Trinity to most Christians.

The case for a strong influence of Zoroastrianism upon Christianity is through Judaism during the Babylonian Captivity (Mills, 1977). In short, many Israelites were conquered by the Babylonians and deported from Judah to Babylon. When Babylon was taken over by the Zoroastrian Persians some sixty years later, the Jews were permitted to go home, where they found people practicing a very similar, but not identical religion who had not been influenced by the long exile, the Samaritans. The disparity between the Samaritans and mainstream Jews shows the likely trajectory of Zoroastrian influence on Judaism, unless their was some prior contact between Jews and Zoroastrians, which is speculative given current evidence. Assuming that the Samaritans represent Judaism sans the influence Zoroastrianism, the influence may be said to be either sweeping or quibbling.
Samaritans number even fewer than Zoroastrians today at a mere 650 or so. Plagued by the same problems of inbreeding and the rejection of converts and most interfaith marriages (although to a much greater extent than the Zoroastrians), their unique faith is nonetheless of interest to many religious scholars. Samaritans only accept the first five books of the Old Testament, the Pentateuch, to be divine. There are also a few minor differences in wording between the Jewish and Samaritan versions of the Pentateuch. If everything in the Old Testament after the Torah was influenced by contact with Zoroastrians, the difference this makes to Christianity and Judaism would obviously be enormous.

On the other hand, most of the similarities between Judaism and Zoroastrianism are mentioned in the Torah. The faiths’ shared monotheism, belief in angelic agents of divine will, complex laws (c.f. Leviticus and Zoroastrian burial customs), and symbolism of God by fire (c.f. Moses and the burning bush), are clearly pre-exilic. Only the extensive description of the angels as being with distinct personalities, largely in apocryphal or non-canonical texts appears to be particularly Zoroastrian. Once again, however, to suppose that the rest these similarities are completely coincidental appears unlikely.

A possible secondary source of Zoroastrian influence upon Christianity comes through the form of Mithraism (Campbell, 1968). Mithraism originated about the First Century BCE, but became prevalent in Roman life between the second and fourth centuries AD. What little is known about the mystery religion is taken from few contemporary sources and from the inscriptions and other art at mithraea, the temples practitioners of the religion gathered at. Followers of Mithraism, all male, worshipped Mithras, their rendition of Mithra, the Zoroastrian the intermediate between the Supreme God Ahura Mazda and men. A critical distinction was that in monotheistic Zoroastrianism, Mithra was a subservient being to Ahura Mazda, approximately the same as a Christian angel or archangel (or other designation, as the business of categorizing angels became very complicated indeed during the Middle ages (Adams, 2003)). In Mithraism, however, Mithras was a God (Campbell), particularly of soldiers and the sun. Mithraism seems to have been particularly common among roman soldiers, and there is considerable evidence that it was extensively practiced by troops garrisoned at Hadrian’s Wall.

Because of its prominence well after the formation of Christianity, Mithraism was probably a peripheral influence upon Christianity at most. A few early Christian artistic themes resemble Mithraic ones, particularly those involving bulls and descriptions of the archangel Michael (who would occupy approximately the same place as Mithra in the respective Christian and Zoroastrian pantheons). The image of Mithras sacrificing a bull, for example, is echoed in those of Saint Saturnin who was martyred buy being dragged by a bull. In this and a few other cases direct influence from Mithraism to Christianity may be inferred on a few matters of art, but little more is likely. Mithraism was simply too late and too mysterious to outsiders to have had much influence upon Christianity.

There is also the issue of deliberate obfuscation of early Christian and Jewish history. Many people interested in the subject have a clear and biased agenda to depict certain historical faiths in a certain light. Some Christians would resent the view that their faith is merely a derivative of a common theme, rather than a unique revelation of God’s will. Some others would exalt in the chance to do just that. The entire issue is greatly clouded by iconoclasm for iconoclasm’s sake, orthodoxy and closed mindedness regarding religious origins, and a quite limited archaeological basis of evidence.

There is, for example, absolutely no archaeological evidence to support a massive exodus from Egypt when large trash piles and other such evidences of human habitation would be expected from so monumentous an event. While most Jews and Christians do not demand such literal truth of their holy texts for this to be an immediate problem to them, it does raise certain questions as to the absolute veracity of the documents in question as the basis for historical speculation. This certainly frustrates the search for any original source of inspiration for both Zoroastrianism and the Abrahamic faiths.

Finally, there may be no issue to discuss at all. The human mind is famous for its ability to find patterns, even when no patterns conveying intelligible information exist. This phenomenon, termed pareidolia, is what leads people to see the face of Mary in sandwiches, hear that certain rock musicians are dead when their albums are played backwards, and more generally, attribute significance to situations where none exists. If the perceived similarities between Zoroastrianism and Christianity are the result of exaggeration of a few largely insignificant similarities, then there may be no historical connection between the two. Certainly any two religions could be drawn at random and parallels drawn between the two, when in fact there may have been no historical reason for those similarities.

The last suggestion is somehow unsatisfying, and seemingly unfalsifiable. The similarities between Christianity and Zoroastrianism, including a monotheistic system complete with the judgment of souls on the basis of their good or evil, a dualistic battle between good and evil, the concept of angels, certain scriptural laws, and a canonical body of scripture upon which religious decisions and arguments are based, looks entirely too similar to be merely the result of a pattern-finding tendency of human minds.

There is, however, no satisfying answer to the question of whether or not Zoroastrianism exerted a large degree of influence over Christianity, largely because there simply is not enough evidence. The circumstantial argument for a large degree of Persian ideology migrating into Judaism, as well as from Mithraism to early Christianity, is an attractive way to explain the similarities between the two faiths, but gaps and inconsistencies keep both from being the definitive explanation.



Sources Cited

Adams, C. (2003) Did Medieval Scholars Really debate the number of Angels That Could Dance on a Pin? Retrieved April 10, 2005.
Bergstrom, L. G. (1992). Zoroastrianism. In The New Encyclopedia Britannica (Vol. 26, pp. 502-507). Chicago: Encyclopedia Britannica.
Campbell, L.A. (1968) Mithraic Iconography and Ideology The Netherlands: Brill

Mills, L.H. (1977), Zarathustra, Philo, The Achaemenids and Israel, New York: AMS Press.


Mills,L.H. (1913) Our Own Religion in Ancient Persia: Zarathustra and The Bible United States: Open Court Publishing

Shaked, S. (2003), Homer, The Bible and Beyond: Scripture and Exegesis In Zoroastrianism Boston: Brill
 
While I'm sure that the intended audience knows when the downfall of the Sassanid Empire was, it'd be nice to set a timeframe in the second sentence for the rest of us.

Zoroastrianism has fascinated me for some time now. I will have to read this paper when I am more awake.




Sassanids... sounds like the name of a race of Dr Who villains.
 
second sentance of the second paragraph says Christians and Muslims where I think it should say Christians and Zoroastrians.

I dissagree with the significant numbers claims since although the ruleing class was Zoroastrian (mostly anyway) I've never seen much evidence it was widely spread amoung the population.
 
Seems fine - I only had the following queries

Imam Malik (a particularly formidable name in the Muslim world) - is it a good idea to clarify why? (Although even I, who attended an Islamic school for two years, know his significance... but I tend to overclarify, so excuse me).

The similarity is certainly there, as Zoroastrianism shares with the Abrahamic faiths the concept of one supreme good deity opposed to one evil deity, angels, and the concept of the judgment of the soul. This grates on me... too many commas?

Many have then wondered if this similarity is because of more than a coincidence. Indeed, it stretches most credulity to assert that from within the highly diverse pool that is human religion two completely independent faiths with such similar worldviews, especially considering their relative proximity. - something feels wrong here... perhaps a 'that' between religion and two? Then rewrite the end of the sentence? Saying it aloud just makes it feel odd to me...

The question of whether Zoroastrianism had an effect on Christianity, for indeed that is the logical direction of ideological flow, which might account for the similarity between the two faiths, is a difficult one to answer. - feels awkward, possibly rephrase? Same for this one:
Religions throughout the world are certainly prone enough to mixing that these are all possible in principle.

Check this one too:
Many interested but necessarily hasty readers of the Zend Avesta overlook the fact that in the ancient documents comprised under that name we have many works of many different ages. Add a comma?

This may also require commas... The definitive form of Zoroastrianism under the Sassanids to which Christianity is compared and holds so many parallels is a monotheistic veneration of the supreme God Ahura Mazda. - between Sassanids and to and between parallels and is.
 
Once again, however, to suppose that the rest these similarities are completely coincidental appears unlikely. - ? Rephrase?

...and from the inscriptions and other art at mithraea... Are you speaking about the place here? Therefore proper noun and capital M.

Followers of Mithraism, all male, worshipped Mithras, their rendition of Mithra, the Zoroastrian the intermediate between the Supreme God Ahura Mazda and men - awkwardly phrased.

...martyred buy being - Spelling.

The similarities between Christianity and Zoroastrianism, including a monotheistic system complete with the judgment of souls on the basis of their good or evil, a dualistic battle between good and evil, the concept of angels, certain scriptural laws, and a canonical body of scripture upon which religious decisions and arguments are based, looks entirely too similar to be merely the result of a pattern-finding tendency of human minds. Long bloody sentence. Use semicolons as it is listing?
 
Adams, C. (2003) Did Medieval Scholars Really debate the number of Angels That Could Dance on a Pin? Retrieved April 10, 2005.

I think if you are citing a website, you must include the URL too? Check how your Prof wants you to use http://www.straightdope.com/classics/a4_132.html in a citation.

I'm a stickler for correct attribution. Oh, check the placement of commas and full stops in your bibliography, as you are inconsistant there.
 
Nitpicking, I know:

"Encylcopedia" => "Encyclopedia".

"posses" => "possess".

"If this particular legal umbrella" - why legal? Isn't it a religious umbrella?

"that would induce the Abbasids do so." => "that would induce the Abbasids to do so."
 
neutrino_cannon said:
This is a paper of relative importance to me. Please point out any glaring errors.
I don't know if this is a "glaring error" but note this:
Zoroastrianism has about an eighth of a million adherents today.
What an odd quantification! It seems to seek a mystical attachment to "...a million adherents..." but, in actual fact, an"eighth of a million" is 125,000.

That sure sounds small in comparison to a reference to "a million" that most people will not actually evaluate.

I have not evaluated the rest on the paper so my absences of comment should not be interpreted as acceptance
 
neutrino_cannon said:
This is a paper of relative importance to me. Please point out any glaring errors.

Didn't have time to read it completely. However, are you sure of the:

having largely converted to Islam in the seventh century during the Umayyad conquest.

part. I recently read the In the Court of the Caliphs and there it was claimed that Persian became muslims under Abbasids, not Umayyads.
 
I read through your paper very quickly and here are some of my comments:

There was, however, a specific exception clause within the more religiously tolerant Abbasid Dynasty (the Umayyad’s immediate successors) regarding certain other faiths, labeled “peoples of the book”. Christians and Muslims were not forced to convert, but could continue to practice their faiths with a certain degree of social autonomy and acceptance, albeit at a higher tax rate.

I think you meant Christians and Jews and not Christian and Muslims.

The definitive form of Zoroastrianism under the Sassanids to which Christianity is compared and holds so many parallels is a monotheistic veneration of the supreme God Ahura Mazda. Opposing Ahura Mazda is the evil deity Angra Mainyu, in some variants the twin of Ahura Mazda, and in some others, merely a different manifestation of the same pervasive spirit of creation that generated the universe. According to all Zoroastrians, Ahura Mazda will eventually prevail over Angra Mainyu. Ahunuvaiti 3:5 sums up the ditheism thus:

* I thought that Zoroastrianism was considered a dualistic and not a monotheistic religion because it has two deities as you described just here? I have also heard of Zoroastrianism described as a dualistic religion but I did not bookmark the sites where I read this, sorry.

* Also I thought I have read that some forms of Christianity such as Gnostic Christianity, show more influence of Zoroastrianism than other forms of Christianity. However, this may be beyond the scope of your paper.

Samaritans number even fewer than Zoroastrians today at a mere 650 or so.

That just made me stop and pause: 650, or perhaps a larger number and some zeros got dropped along the way? I would be surprised to find out that a group of only 650 people of any demographic would show up on a survey.
 
Shera said:
That just made me stop and pause: 650, or perhaps a larger number and some zeros got dropped along the way? I would be surprised to find out that a group of only 650 people of any demographic would show up on a survey.

The only remaining comunities are at Mount Gerizim and in Holon. Counting them isn't difficult.

Edited to add. There are only 4-7 shakers left.
 
Many have then wondered if this similarity is because of more than a coincidence. Indeed, it stretches most credulity to assert that from within the highly diverse pool that is human religion two completely independent faiths with such similar worldviews, especially considering their relative proximity.

This could be streamlined, and the second sentence is missing a verb:
Many have wondered if this similarity is more than a coincidence. Indeed, it stretches credulity to assert that from within the highly diverse pool of human religion and in such proximity there arose two completely independent faiths with such similar worldviews.
 
geni said:
The only remaining comunities are at Mount Gerizim and in Holon. Counting them isn't difficult.

Edited to add. There are only 4-7 shakers left.
Leave and learn, I didn't know there was interest in tracking such things. Thanks for the info! :)
 
There is a great deal of ambiguity regarding the development of both faiths, so much so that it is hard to determine whether Zoroastrianism affected Judaism (and secondarily Christianity), Christianity, or whether all the monotheistic religions of the Middle East were derived from a common source.

I would rephrase this:

... so much so that it is hard to determine whether Zoroastrianism affected monotheistic religions of the Middle East...

It requires judging your audience, but I would think anyone reading this would at least know that Christianity and Islam are influenced by Judaism, and all three are monotheistic religions arising from the Middle East. The two Christianities in a row make the sentence awkward.

Even the time during which he lived is unknown, probably lying somewhere between the fourteenth and sixth centuries BCE. This is clearly a huge extent of time, and the issue is argued vociferously, but the most reasonable conclusion is simply that nobody knows when exactly Zarathustra lived, as most of the arguments are based on rather scanty evidence.

Split this up some, the sentences are disjointed and jumbled, maybe:

Even the time in which he lived is argued vociferously, although the most likely period is 1300-500 BCE. This is clearly a huge extent of time: most arguments are based on scanty evidence. The most reasonable conclusion...

I happen to think colons are way underused ;-).

The question of whether Zoroastrianism had an effect on Christianity, for indeed that is the logical direction of ideological flow, which might account for the similarity between the two faiths, is a difficult one to answer.

Combine the two clauses for clarity:

... a logical ideological flow that could account for the similarity of the two faiths....

End of fifth paragraph, I assume you mean we are unable to form a hypothesis with the current data. improvable (we can improve the hypothesis) -> unprovable or unsupported (we can't "prove" history).

Lastly, this might be a side-effect of posting on the board, and is nit-picky anyway, but the long quote from the Ahunuvaiti should label the verses in text (that looks like multiple verses starting with 5), not in the attribution, and should be indented. (At least that is the style I was taught for the Bible... I would assume similar requirements hold for other holy books). The attribution should read "from Ahunuvaiti, chapter three:" or similar. Your quote from Mills should be indented too.

There are consistency errors in whether you put a line between paragraphs.

Lastly, I would present your thesis earlier, and make it a more logical outgrowth of the intro. You jump from being "people's of the book" to "could they affect Christianity". A better link might be to pose the rhetorical question:

But these similarities lead us to a central question: How exactly does Zoroastrianism fit within the context of the evolution of Middle Eastern religions, and specifically, could it have left its mark on Christianity.

That is at least what I can find in the style. Then again, your style is your own. Overall a very nice paper. A little trick: read the paper aloud, making longer pauses at the commas and other punctuation. You can tell when things are getting too choppy.

If this were for school (entry college English class), and I your teacher, I would give you an A-. But then again I hate English ;-).
 
I hope my use of red ink doesn't damage your self-esteem.

Zoroastrians were relatively common in Iran I thought it was the state religion. That would make "relatively common" an understatement ... the nonconsensual nature of conversion to Islam Source??? ...There was, however, a specific exception clause within the more religiously tolerant Abbasid Dynasty (the Umayyad’s immediate successors) regarding certain other faiths, labeled “peoples of the book”. The concept of "peoples of the book" is Qur'aanic, surely? ... because of more than a coincidence... Drop "because of" ... it is hard to determine whether Zoroastrianism affected Judaism (and secondarily Christianity), Christianity Bit of a hiccup there ... improvable You mean "unprovable".(Zoroaster is the Greek rendition of the same). "Name"? ... the cross is merely a symbol for the Trinity to most Christians Iffy. ... Judaism sans the influence Zoroastrianism Insert "of" What little is known about the mystery religion is taken from few contemporary sources and from the inscriptions and other art at mithraea, the temples practitioners of the religion gathered at. Oops. Followers of Mithraism, all male, worshipped Mithras, their rendition of Mithra, the Zoroastrian the intermediate between the Supreme God Ahura Mazda and men. Oops again. ... roman soldiers "Roman".
 
Dr Adequate said:
I hope my use of red ink doesn't damage your self-esteem.

Zoroastrians were relatively common in Iran I thought it was the state religion. That would make "relatively common" an understatement

I would have been if it was inforced. The rulers were Zoroastrian the general population was not.
 
Thank you all very much. I know that I can always turn to this forum when I need help editing papers.

Even so, I was surprised to find that basically all the commentary was helpful, so from the top:

Beleth:

I have added the approximate date of the fall of the Sassanid dynasty. It's basically in one of the first waves of Islamic expansion, from the period from Muhammad's death to the battle of Tours. It's a hundred years of the Umayyads kicking ass and taking names. Since this is just a Western Civ paper, some more clarification might be a good idea.

Glad to hear you find the subject interesting.

geni:

While indeed the lower classes were not necessarily Zoroastrians, and it does not appear that any sort of forced conversion was going on (quite the opposite), all the references I have seen to slaughter and conversion of Zoroastrians in the Umayyad conquest leads me to believe that there were plenty present.

Furthermore, and Jewish contact with Zoroastrians of consequence to post Pentateuch writing would have happened before the Sassanid dynasty. Perhaps I should have made that clearer.

Oh, and I mean to say "Christians and Jews."

Kiless:

Thank you very much, O Queen of syntax. I tend to make a lot of silly mistakes when I'm typing, and especially when I'm under the wire. I've taken all of your suggestions regarding awkward or incorrect sentences (either through revision or purge), except for one which is a quote (which would not have been obvious due to strange Word -> forum formatting blips). The mistake in citation was a hiccough, I've cleaned it up since (I'm trying to use APA citations format BTW). I've also clarified Imam Malik's importance.

Claus Floodin’ Larson:

Thank you for pointing those “trivial” errors out. They would not have been corrected otherwise, so I don’t mind having my nits picked.

SezMe

I wasn’t trying to achieve anything special by relating the number that way, it’s just the number I’ve seen quoted (often in that way). As with many relatively small religious minorities, and indeed, compared to all of their neighbors, the Zoroastrians are small, precise numbers are not available, and so if anything I wanted to avoid a sense of precision in presenting their ranks that way.

LW

I’m pretty sure that it was the Umayyads who converted Iran, not the Abbasids. For starters all the references I see to the fall of the Sassanid dynasty mention the Umayyad dynasty, and given the timeframe in which they fell, the Abbasids weren’t around yet. On a less solid note, it was my impression that the Abbasids were a little more tolerant of Zoroastrians than the Umayyads were, although the bulk of them may have been converted under the second caliphate. I don’t know.

But I’m pretty darned sure.

Shera:

Thanks for catching that sentence. It was pretty nonsensical the way I had it written.

You could describe Zoroastrianism as dualistic just as much as you could describe Christianity as being dualistic. There are two powers, one good and one evil sure, but for most Zoroastrians I’ve read about, evil is definitely going to lose. You could call it ditheistic because there are two deity-ish beings, but then you could call Satan a deity and say that the Christians believe in two gods as well. They’re both classified as monotheistic, as I have seen it, regardless of this.

Yup, there are only 650 Samaritans left, not 6,500 or 65,000. That’s up from several years ago, actually. I vaguely recall a 1930’s ish report that had them pegged at 300 some. From what I’ve read, they have to be careful to prevent inbreeding.

Spektator:

I have corrected the sentence. Thanks for pointing that out.

Gestahl

I think I got most of what you pointed out, except for the bit about the quote from the Avesta. That whole thing appears to be line five.

The strangeness is indeed from dropping the essay in from Word.

Dr. Adequate:

http://www.vohuman.org/Article/Islamic era histroy of Zoroastrians of Iran.htm

A reasonable source on the conversion of Iran, I think. I’m too tired and I think I jumped into way too deep of a subject.
Yes, as far as I know, the idea of “peoples of the book” is in the Koran, having seen the quotes which support the concept (can’t remember them off the top of my head). It just wasn’t until the Abbasid Dynasty that such exception was provided to Zoroastrians.

Oh, and the red only hurts my eyes, not my self esteem.

I think I corrected or clarified the rest of the hiccoughs you identified, though I stand by my assertion that Zoroastrians don’t actually pray into the fire. I also stand by my assertion that it’s roughly analogous to the Cross as a symbol of the Trinity, even though some Christian groups don’t believe in the Trinity (notably the JW’s). It’s a generalization, sure, but as far as the mainstream history of Christianity goes, I think it works.



Anyway, thanks again, and I hope you aren’t too offended that I’ve really only made cosmetic changes to the original paper. Partly, I do stand by the original thesis and most of the facts contained therein, and partly, I just don’t have the energy right now to re-write the whole thing.
 
D'oh!

Here's the finished essay, so you can burn with ire about any suggestions of yours I didn't take. :)

Once again, paragraph rectification may be a little inconsistent.


Zoroastrianism has about an eighth of a million adherents today. Prior to the downfall of the Sassanid Empire at the hands of the Umayyad Caliphate in the late 600’s, Zoroastrians were relatively common in Iran and China. While a few remain in Iran, they are totally unknown in China (although a few of their temples still attest their presence there), and a significant number known as Parsis live in India (Encyclopedia Britannica). Otherwise Zoroastrians are totally absent from their ancestral lands (scattered reports of large numbers of Zoroastrians in Iraq almost certainly refer to the obscure Yazidi sect), having largely converted to Islam in the seventh century during the Umayyad conquest. Because of the time since the conversion of most Zoroastrian lands and the nonconsensual nature of conversion to Islam, it might appear remarkable that there are any Zoroastrians left at all in Iran.

There was, however, a specific exception clause within the more religiously tolerant Abbasid Dynasty (the Umayyad’s immediate successors) regarding certain other faiths, labeled “peoples of the book”. Christians and Jews were not forced to convert, but were allowed to practice their respective faiths with a relative social autonomy and acceptance, albeit at a higher tax rate. Some Muslim intellectuals, including Imam Malik (The founder of the Maliki school of religious Jurisprudence, the second most popular such school of religious law in Sunni Islam), argued that this same exception should be extended to Zoroastrians, which explains their continued existence in Iran, but poses the question of why the Imam thought that Zoroastrians were “peoples of the book”.

The term “people(s) of the book” in Islamic doctrine refers to peoples whom, according to the Koran, possess divine scriptures (albeit corrupted ones). If this particular legal (for the law was at that point religious) umbrella was extended to Zoroastrians along with other Abrahamic faiths (and Zoroastrianism certainly is not an Abrahamic faith), then there must be some compelling similarity that would induce the Abbasids to do so. The similarity is certainly there; Zoroastrianism has in common with the Abrahamic faiths the ideas of heaven and hell, supremely good and supremely evil entities, and angels. Considering the wide range of human religious beliefs, it seems entirely unlikely that this similarity is entirely a coincidence; for it stretches credulity to assert that two entirely independent religious traditions came upon such parallel beliefs without any cross pollination whatsoever.

Given current information, or rather the lack thereof, it is difficult to tell the degree and mechanism for any possible transmission of Zoroastrian ideas to Christianity. Contrary to many assertions that Zoroastrianism clearly is responsible for many Christian doctrines, the matter is irresolvable with current information. There is a great deal of ambiguity regarding the development of both faiths, so much so that it is hard to determine whether Zoroastrianism affected Judaism (and secondarily Christianity), Christianity directly, or whether all the monotheistic religions of the Middle East were derived from a common source. Religious mixing and equivalence between deities, called syncretism, was extremely common in the Mediterranean region of the world; this is a definite possibility. More solid evidence could conclusively prove the point.

A final possibility remains that the resemblance between Christianity and Zoroastrianism is in fact coincidental and superficial, and any parallels drawn between the two result from the common elements of all human religions and the human tendency to find patterns where none in fact exist. To prove this would require a vigorous review of the similarities between the two faiths and a thorough demonstration of how these similarities are both inconsequential in a historical context as well as likely to arouse notice. This hypothesis is, along with the others, largely unprovable with current information.

The prophet Zarathustra (Zoroaster is the Greek rendition) is considered to have founded the Zoroastrian religion. To what extent this means that Zoroaster came up with an entirely new faith, and to what extent this means he reformed the preexisting polytheistic faiths of the area into a monotheistic framework is debatable (Shaked, 2003). Even the time during which he lived is unknown, probably lying somewhere between the fourteenth and sixth centuries BCE. The amount to which Zoroastrian ideas could have propagated clearly depends to some extent on when the religion was founded, as do any arguments derived from the general history of the faith. Alas, any arguments about when the prophet lived are constructed at present upon shaky and inconclusive evidence. Furthermore, very little is known about what early Zoroastrianism was like. The Avesta (Zoroastrian holy book) was probably passed down orally during at least part of its history, and parts probably added, edited and removed. According to Mills (Mills, 1913),

Many interested but necessarily hasty readers of the Zend Avesta overlook
the fact that in the ancient documents comprised under that name we have many works of many different ages.

Furthermore, many of the early Zoroastrian states, especially the Parthians, kept poor or no written records. What is known of their practices is largely from biased Greek, Jewish and Roman sources (Shaked). By the time of solid written records under the Sassanids ca 230 AD, Christianity had already been established, which would preclude a large Zoroastrian role in that religion’s formation, although not necessarily the evolution of its doctrines.
The form of Zoroastrianism to which Christianity most closely compares, for indeed there have been many different branches of Zoroastrianism, holds that there is a supreme Being transliterated variously as Oromazd or Ahura Mazda. Opposing Ahura Mazda is the evil deity Angra Mainyu, in some variants the twin of Ahura Mazda, and in some others, merely a different manifestation of the same pervasive spirit of creation that generated the universe. According to most Zoroastrians, Ahura Mazda will eventually prevail over Angra Mainyu. Ahunuvaiti 3:5 sums up the ditheism thus:

Of these Twin Spirits, the Evil one chooses doing the worst,
While the most bountiful Holy Spirit of Goodness, clothing itself in the imperishable heavens, chooses Truth and Righteousness.
And so will those who would please God
with righteous deeds, performed with faith in Truth.

Zoroastrianism also incorporates the concept of eternal rewards for just life and final judgment of souls, much like Christianity. Fire is also used extensively in Zoroastrian rituals, so much that many form the misconception that the Zoroastrians are actually praying to the fire. In actuality, fire is merely a symbol for Ahura Mazda, just as the cross is merely a symbol for the Trinity to most Christians.

The case for a strong influence of Zoroastrianism upon Christianity is through Judaism during the Babylonian Captivity (Mills, 1977). In short, many Israelites were conquered by the Babylonians and deported from Judah to Babylon. When Babylon was taken over by the Zoroastrian Persians some sixty years later, the Jews were permitted to go home, where they found people practicing a very similar, but not identical religion who had not been influenced by the long exile, the Samaritans. The disparity between the Samaritans and mainstream Jews shows the likely trajectory of Zoroastrian influence on Judaism, unless their was some prior contact between Jews and Zoroastrians, which is speculative given current evidence. Assuming that the Samaritans represent Judaism sans the influence Zoroastrianism, the influence may be said to be either sweeping or quibbling.
Samaritans number even fewer than Zoroastrians today at a mere 650 or so. Plagued by the same problems of inbreeding and the rejection of converts and most interfaith marriages (although to a much greater extent than the Zoroastrians), their unique faith is nonetheless of interest to many religious scholars. Samaritans only accept the first five books of the Old Testament, the Pentateuch, to be divine. There are also a few minor differences in wording between the Jewish and Samaritan versions of the Pentateuch. If everything in the Old Testament after the Torah was influenced by contact with Zoroastrians, the difference this makes to Christianity and Judaism would obviously be enormous.

On the other hand, most of the similarities between Judaism and Zoroastrianism are mentioned in the Torah. The faiths’ shared monotheism, belief in angelic agents of divine will, complex laws (c.f. Leviticus and Zoroastrian burial customs), and symbolism of God by fire (c.f. Moses and the burning bush), are clearly pre-exilic. Only the extensive description of the angels as being with distinct personalities, largely in apocryphal or non-canonical texts appears to be particularly Zoroastrian. Once again, however, to suppose that the rest these similarities are completely coincidental appears unlikely.

A possible secondary source of Zoroastrian influence upon Christianity comes through the form of Mithraism (Campbell, 1968). Mithraism originated about the First Century BCE, but became prevalent in Roman life between the second and fourth centuries AD. What little is known about the mystery religion is taken from few contemporary sources and from the inscriptions and other art at Mithraea, the temples practitioners of the religion gathered at. Mithraism only accepted male initiates who would rise through a hierarchy of some sort as they learned more and more of the religion’s secrets. Converts worshipped Mithras, a Greco Roman syncretic variation upon the Zoroastrian angel Mithra. In Mithraism Mithras was depicted as the personification of the sun, and therefore identified with Apollo, as well as being particularly fond off soldiers. A critical distinction was that in monotheistic Zoroastrianism, Mithra was a subservient being to Ahura Mazda, approximately the same as a Christian angel or archangel (or other designation, as the business of categorizing angels became very complicated indeed during the Middle ages (Adams, 2003)). In Mithraism, however, Mithras was a God (Campbell), particularly of soldiers and the sun. Mithraism seems to have been particularly common among Roman soldiers, and there is considerable evidence that it was extensively practiced by troops garrisoned at Hadrian’s Wall.

Because of its prominence well after the formation of Christianity, Mithraism was probably a peripheral influence upon Christianity at most. On the other hand, it is difficult to tell because as a mystery religion, little is known about the specifics of Mithraism. A few early Christian artistic themes resemble Mithraic ones, particularly those involving bulls and descriptions of the archangel Michael (who would occupy approximately the same place as Mithra in the respective Christian and Zoroastrian pantheons). The image of Mithras sacrificing a bull, for example, is echoed in those of Saint Saturnin who was martyred by being dragged by a bull. Certain venerations of Michael, particularly as an angel concerned with the well-being of soldiers, also sounds similar to worship of Mithras. In this and a few other cases direct influence from Mithraism to Christianity may be inferred on a few matters of art, but little more is likely. Mithraism was likely too late and too closed to have had much influence upon Christianity.

There is also the issue of deliberate obfuscation of early Christian and Jewish history. Many people interested in the subject have a clear and biased agenda to depict certain historical faiths in a certain light. Some Christians would resent the view that their faith is merely a derivative of a common theme, rather than a unique revelation of God’s will. Some others would exalt in the chance to do just that. The issue is clouded by iconoclasm for iconoclasm’s sake, orthodoxy and closed mindedness regarding religious origins, and a quite limited archaeological basis of evidence.

There is, for example, absolutely no archaeological evidence to support a massive exodus from Egypt when large trash piles and other such evidences of human habitation would be expected from so monumentous an event. While most Jews and Christians do not demand such literal truth of their holy texts for this to be an immediate problem to them, it does raise certain questions as to the absolute veracity of the documents in question as the basis for historical speculation. This certainly frustrates the search for any original source of inspiration for both Zoroastrianism and the Abrahamic faiths.

Finally, there may be no similarity at all. It is very easy to draw illusory connections between two coincidental things and then seemingly strengthen the case by retroactively realizing anything that seemingly ties the unrelated things together. These phenomena, termed pareidolia and cherry picking (also Texas Sharp Shooter’s fallacy), is what leads people to see the face of Mary in sandwiches, hear that certain rock musicians are dead when their albums are played backwards, take horoscopes seriously, and more generally, attribute significance to situations where none exists. If the perceived similarities between Zoroastrianism and Christianity are the result of exaggeration of a few largely insignificant similarities, then there may be no historical connection between the two. The entire case for similarity between the two, then, would be built upon a series of compelling, but irrelevant events that show no clear pattern. Certainly any two religions could be drawn at random and parallels drawn between the two, when in fact there may have been no historical reason for those similarities.

The last suggestion is somehow unsatisfying, and seemingly unfalsifiable. The similarities between Christianity and Zoroastrianism are enormous; both have a monotheistic system with the judgment of souls on the basis of their good or evil, a dualistic battle between good and evil, angels, certain laws, and a canonical body of scripture upon which religious decisions and arguments are based. Geographical proximity, and the extreme parallels in religious doctrine make it very unlikely that both religions aren’t at least the result of common descent.
There is, however, no satisfying answer to the question of whether or not Zoroastrianism exerted a large degree of influence over Christianity, largely because there simply is not enough evidence. The circumstantial argument for a large degree of Persian ideology migrating into Judaism, as well as from Mithraism to early Christianity, is an attractive way to explain the similarities between the two faiths, but gaps and inconsistencies keep both from being the definitive explanation.



Sources Cited

Adams, C. (2003). Did Medieval Scholars Really debate the number of Angels That Could Dance on a Pin? Retrieved April 10, 2005. From http://www.straightdope.com/classics/a4_132.html

Bergstrom, L. G. (1992). Zoroastrianism. In The New Encyclopedia Britannica (Vol. 26, pp. 502-507). Chicago: Encyclopedia Britannica.

Campbell, L.A. (1968). Mithraic Iconography and Ideology The Netherlands: Brill

Mills, L.H. (1977). Zarathustra, Philo, The Achaemenids and Israel, New York: AMS Press.

Mills,L.H. (1913). Our Own Religion in Ancient Persia: Zarathustra and The Bible United States: Open Court Publishing

Shaked, S. (2003). Homer, The Bible and Beyond: Scripture and Exegesis In Zoroastrianism Boston: Brill
 
neutrino_cannon said:
Shera:
You could describe Zoroastrianism as dualistic just as much as you could describe Christianity as being dualistic. There are two powers, one good and one evil sure, but for most Zoroastrians I’ve read about, evil is definitely going to lose. You could call it ditheistic because there are two deity-ish beings, but then you could call Satan a deity and say that the Christians believe in two gods as well. They’re both classified as monotheistic, as I have seen it, regardless of this.
Thanks Neutrino -- I had read my source* too quickly. I was skimming it to verify that indeed many people thought it had influenced Judaism (a brand new idea to me at the time, which intrigued me because I'm Jewish) and ended up misunderstanding what was a side point for me.

So I'm glad you posted! I enjoyed reading your paper -- good luck with the grade!

*I checked it again as well as some others, and saw that the evil entity is regarded as a spirit and not a god.
 

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